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Antivist
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Tablet Testing + Results Apr 26, 2015 12:41:51 GMT -5

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Post by Antivist on Apr 26, 2015 12:41:51 GMT -5

Hey guys what's up (ouo)/
So yesterday I got a brand new wacom intuos tablet (I love the ~~shit~~ out of omfg much better than mouse), and I need constructive criticism. This is my real life traditional artwork skills brought to life so any critiquing will help me in real life with traditional and digital! The first thing I made with it was Roselyn which is at the bottom.

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The beautiful and powerful, mountain lion

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This is my main character I created a while ago shes the god of realms and such. She can go through portals and blast red auras have you ever seen the new movie Godzilla 2014 if you've seen his atomic breath blast thats what hers looks like except its red. She doesn't have an age she just exists, but pulls off the look and ideal of a teenager

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His name is Mydriasis, and he falls victim to abusive drug testing, one of the permanent side affects being his dilated pupils, (very rough sketch of his eyes). He received his name in a laboratory after they no longer had a use for him, right before they threw him out. He tends to twitch a lot, suffers from paranoia, anxiety, and stress. It almost seems as he is beginning to lose his sanity, but fights hard to stay alive. Hes scared of everything, anything he sees that abruptly appears before his eyes, or any sound that is alarmed, he panics and scurrys into a hostile feared stance that hangs low to the ground. If he is cornered, he becomes very hostile, aggressive, and assertive, and will not hesitate to attack whatever gets too close to him when he is feared.

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The mighty staff tower!
Bottom to Top: Look at the friggin' staff list to your left!
Took two days to make it, but it was worth it. I hope all you lovely staff like it, though some of you I do not know, I still appreciate you! Also sorry if I used a character you don't use anymore!

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Basic line art of Roselyn running

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Last Edit: Jun 25, 2015 12:16:05 GMT -5 by Antivist

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Tablet Testing + Results Apr 26, 2015 13:03:17 GMT -5

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Post by ~flαмε~ on Apr 26, 2015 13:03:17 GMT -5

Wow anti that's superb, it's brilliant, but maybe th legs need to thin a bit, itlooks a it more lion like instead of wolf like also the fur is good, maybe relax it a bit like on the black ende so it goes with the shape but apart from that i'm liking it

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xtigerlilly Welcome To All packs [Muffled Megalovania] long time no see Posts: 1,439 RP Style: Balanced	Tablet Testing + Results Apr 26, 2015 13:08:22 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by xtigerlilly on Apr 26, 2015 13:08:22 GMT -5 I love it anti! x3 I reallly need to get a tablet for drawing... I am tired of mouse struggles Dx any ways... I think it looks fab! :o flame pretty much covered everything i would say.
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Tablet Testing + Results Apr 26, 2015 16:53:35 GMT -5

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Post by ImAnimalAtHeart on Apr 26, 2015 16:53:35 GMT -5

Sorry this is late, but your drawing is very good, especially for a first time using a new tablet. :3
Although, if you do want criticism...I would say perhaps the legs need to be thinned a tad? Another thing would be the dew-claws, wolves don't have then on their hind legs. And lastly, the forehead could be more rounded and less of a stream-lined shape. But that's just my personal opinion.
And if you're going for a completely realistic style, I would suggest using references and studying pictures, it's what I often have to resort to for a difficult pose. xD

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Tablet Testing + Results Apr 26, 2015 18:25:32 GMT -5

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Post by Azure on Apr 26, 2015 18:25:32 GMT -5

Looks great in general, I really like the expression you have given her. Just a few small anatomy kinks that need to be worked out, nothing really big.
What I suggest is to look at this picture for the legs.

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Overall you did an amazing job! -high five-

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Antivist Known By All Packs God Complex Posts: 636 RP Style: Balanced	Tablet Testing + Results Apr 26, 2015 18:47:41 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Antivist on Apr 26, 2015 18:47:41 GMT -5 Thanks guys! and thank you Azure for the reference I have such a hard time with back legs standing /.\

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Antivist Known By All Packs God Complex Posts: 636 RP Style: Balanced	Tablet Testing + Results Apr 26, 2015 22:44:04 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Antivist on Apr 26, 2015 22:44:04 GMT -5 Updated it to a better example of my art

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Tablet Testing + Results Apr 27, 2015 8:57:12 GMT -5

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Post by Miguen on Apr 27, 2015 8:57:12 GMT -5

Congrats on the new tablet! I've used some before in school, but never really got the hang of it, although the technology behind it really is quite cool. I think the drawing's great, but my eye for art is in no way sharp enough to pass you any further critique. Roselyn's looking awesome, and you'll probably master the way of the tablet in no time!

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Mosasaurus Delta Giant-Sharteater-Mosasaurus am i a dog trainer yet Posts: 206	Tablet Testing + Results Apr 27, 2015 9:47:53 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Mosasaurus on Apr 27, 2015 9:47:53 GMT -5 Awesome! The anatomy looks good for me, but you should have a look at these: SPOILER: Click to show ~~the hardest things to draw, ugh.~~ I hope these were helpful. ^_^
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Antivist Known By All Packs God Complex Posts: 636 RP Style: Balanced	Tablet Testing + Results Apr 28, 2015 23:23:51 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Antivist on Apr 28, 2015 23:23:51 GMT -5 Thank you guys so much for the sheets! I will definitely be using them! The new upload is just a cheeb gift, hope you guys love it as much as I do!~

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